Essay Writing

First look at the list of school subjects and discuss how you think they could be useful in the future on a personal or professional level.

Not everything we study at school is useful. Discuss.

Read and punctuate the following essay. Then divide it into the correct paragraphs.

it is said that education is one of the most important aspects of a young persons development throughout their school life pupils are obliged to study many subjects in this essay i will argue whether everything we study at school is useful or not school touches on a wide range of skills and knowledge which i believe will be useful to a greater or lesser extent depending on the career you choose to follow there is evidence that  much of what we learn at school will not only be applied in our daily lives in the future but will also provide us with a rich cultural level English for example is vital as it allows us to communicate with people from all over the world thus opening up a lot of academic and professional opportunities indeed learning subjects we find challenging is also part of our training and teaches young people to be disciplined and persevere in the face of difficulties therefore school is also about teaching life skills like socializing team work thinking skills and good manners i believe these aspects of education are vital because they create well rounded individuals ready to contribute in a positive way to society in conclusion whatever we learn at school makes us what we are and as a young person we will never know how this will influence the decisions we make or the paths we choose in life it is only in retrospect that we can see the usefulness of everything we learn

Do you agree with this essay? Is there anything you would change?